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 Posted: Thu, 10th Nov 2005 06:04 Post subject: NFOrce poets |
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Let's see who here ever written a poem and is willing to share?
Could be anything 
Something you wrote in highschool.
Something you wrote for your ex fiance whore who just got up and left and told you she didn't love you anymore.
Right. If you want to write a poem for this topic please only write one.
A “I AM FROM POEM”
Here are a few samples
Right. Only thing you can't do is make fun of others poems. Even if it's crap. Utter shit. Or the best thing you've read since Shakespeare back in school.
Also drawnings are allowed. MSPAINT ONLY!
open up ms paint. Draw a few lines. Then post it and talk about why you wrote it.
LET THE CREATIVE SPAM FEST BEGIN!
We're just two lost souls swimming in a fish bowl, year after year, running over the same old ground. What have we found? The same old fears. Wish you were here. |
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SycoShaman
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| Posted: Thu, 10th Nov 2005 07:36 Post subject: |
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Im not to good at poetry, well, in a sense i am, i can spit out a good song here and there, but not simply spoken/written poetry 
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Esel_Gesi
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| Posted: Thu, 10th Nov 2005 07:47 Post subject: |
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When class is boring i write some things. I'll see if any of them are good enough to post.
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Jorn
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| Posted: Thu, 10th Nov 2005 08:34 Post subject: |
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| Posted: Thu, 10th Nov 2005 15:27 Post subject: |
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POST POST POST!
and syco, sweetie, SHARE SHARE SHARE!
and jorn, you, sexy hot man, you write us a poem . I linked you to samples. 
WRITE SOMETHING.
We're just two lost souls swimming in a fish bowl, year after year, running over the same old ground. What have we found? The same old fears. Wish you were here.
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TheSaint
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| Posted: Thu, 10th Nov 2005 15:30 Post subject: |
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once upon a time i was furious
his name was: Injurious
he didnt wan't to post his photo
what a homo.
good ?
Last edited by skidrow on Thu, 10th Nov 2005 15:31; edited 1 time in total
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| Posted: Thu, 10th Nov 2005 15:30 Post subject: |
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Roses are red;
Violets are blue.
God made me pretty.
What happened to you?
We're just two lost souls swimming in a fish bowl, year after year, running over the same old ground. What have we found? The same old fears. Wish you were here.
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TheSaint
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| Posted: Thu, 10th Nov 2005 15:35 Post subject: |
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may the wind be always at your back and the sun upon your face, and the winds of destiny carry you aloft to dace with the stars
this is the best!
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| Posted: Thu, 10th Nov 2005 15:45 Post subject: |
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haha, so you are gay now 
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| Posted: Thu, 10th Nov 2005 15:49 Post subject: |
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make up some poems he said
throw in some words like love and hate
think a lot and wait, wait, wait
someone will say it's great
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ChinUp
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| Posted: Thu, 10th Nov 2005 16:06 Post subject: |
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oad to an ass
some say you are crass
some say your the shit
but i say your fine
when on the back of a chick
"Most of the change we think we see in life is due to truths being in & out of favor." ~ Frost
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| Posted: Thu, 10th Nov 2005 16:17 Post subject: |
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Lets hear some long poems!
Come on children. Four lines. That's like childs play!
We're just two lost souls swimming in a fish bowl, year after year, running over the same old ground. What have we found? The same old fears. Wish you were here.
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ChinUp
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| Posted: Thu, 10th Nov 2005 19:09 Post subject: |
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in the merry month of mai
noone did ever stay
just the ones that had no dreams
under the same roof so it seems
right now everything is gray
in my eyes you are watering away
over my lips is a smile
u should not have told me to leave
so now i take my revenge
suddently it went
u turned your head
couple of seconds later you were dead
kisses to you all
so you wont see im actually really small
i tried to make it pretty good, it has a hidden message btw
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| Posted: Thu, 10th Nov 2005 19:22 Post subject: |
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people kept talking
once they send me walking
some of them found out the hard way
to keep all your teeth you have to let me stay
you even thought it was funny
or you didnt think about the past
u know you would not last
riches arent gained by treason
people should know this is a reason
in which i find myself
cought alone and cold
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SycoShaman
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| Posted: Thu, 10th Nov 2005 23:53 Post subject: |
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hahaha leave it to the frenchman to write a moderatly sized poem 
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| Posted: Fri, 11th Nov 2005 00:07 Post subject: |
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im not french, its not even my motherlanguage
this is why they are so long
 Spoiler: | read the first letters of each poem |
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SycoShaman
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| Posted: Fri, 11th Nov 2005 01:23 Post subject: |
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Nice
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fisk
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| Posted: Fri, 11th Nov 2005 02:07 Post subject: |
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as I wandered in restless dreams,
deep in thought, or so it seems,
I strayed aside, and almost fell,
in what appeared an endless well,
Within I looked, and what I saw
was a meatlike darkness, all but raw
It made me falter, made me gasp
This blackened heart in my grasp
Was no one elses, but my own
I realized, "in this world I am alone"
And whence I turned to stray away
I knew endless within me it would stay.
But I still smiled, and carried on
For the journey had just begun
The glance ahead which made me free
Also taught me, the past is just a memory
Yes, yes I'm back.
Somewhat.
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| Posted: Fri, 11th Nov 2005 05:43 Post subject: |
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These are nice and alll. But why do they have to rhyme?
Ok. Jean Luc Picard wrote that poem just for that secret message 
So it's kinda pointless... but fisk... you... why did you write that
We're just two lost souls swimming in a fish bowl, year after year, running over the same old ground. What have we found? The same old fears. Wish you were here.
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fisk
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| Posted: Fri, 11th Nov 2005 10:24 Post subject: |
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i was bored
Yes, yes I'm back.
Somewhat.
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| Posted: Fri, 11th Nov 2005 11:22 Post subject: |
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i do not write...i draw.
jesus christ was a gangsta rapper. they killed him. he came back and made a platinum album.
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| Posted: Fri, 11th Nov 2005 12:53 Post subject: |
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| TheSaint wrote: |
may the wind be always at your back and the sun upon your face, and the winds of destiny carry you aloft to dace with the stars
this is the best! |
That was beautiful, is it to dance with the stars or dace with the stars?
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| Posted: Fri, 11th Nov 2005 15:52 Post subject: |
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i didn't say it had to be in english. You can write what ever you want as long as it's a poem. And if it isn't in english then you can just write breif summary and explanation of it in english
stoozie! DRAW SOMETHING POETIC FOR US!
We're just two lost souls swimming in a fish bowl, year after year, running over the same old ground. What have we found? The same old fears. Wish you were here.
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| Posted: Fri, 11th Nov 2005 19:00 Post subject: |
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| skidrow wrote: | once upon a time i was furious
his name was: Injurious
he didnt wan't to post his photo
what a homo.
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I can feel your anger in this one.. very nice |
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